Is it dark enough, sister?
Do you need the light?
I hung your picture
over my bed
and your eyes
that cannot see
found a corner.
Stay with me
for a little while
I can be your eyes.
The quilt our gramma made
I use it now
to warm me
I pull its thickness
to my chin at night
when the moon
smears through the window.
It is cold here
without you ~ I sleep
in our mother’s robe
the way she taught us
arms ’round our knees
head tucked to chest —
I look out the window
beyond its coppered rivets
and see you, young again
red bicycle with white basket
full of apples and violets.
Stay with me
in this corner which is my room.
Can you see me, sister
past the disrobing of night
the arms of the sun
pulling the darkness away?
Sister, stay with me
we can laugh
and tickle each other
like we did
as young girls
running to the beach.
Sister, I miss you so
but I know you had to go!
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In loving memory of my dearest sister Terri who died of ALS
on December 31, 2018.
What a heartbreaking but beautiful tribute Margie!
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Thank you so much, Kim . It was hard to write.
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You did her proud!
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Reblogged this on By Hook Or By Book and commented:
Margie writes absolutely exquisite poetry, but this is especially heartfelt as itβs a tribute to her sister.
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You are very kind. Thank you, Kim.
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Very strong. You had me with you. I was seeing it. A friend’s wife just died from ALS. That’s a hard disease. It’s hard on the caretakers too.
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Yes, Syd. It’s a truly horrific disease. Thanks for visiting and the comment.
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If you post something that I miss, send me a message so I can catch it.
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Ok, thanks Syd. π
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This is very beautiful, I am so sorry about your sister. Bless you this Christmas.
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Thank you for the kind words and the visit.
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This is so beautifully riveting. Every word touched me and I could feel the warm relationship you and your sister shared.
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How very kind of you! Thank you! My sister and I were very close and she is so missed!
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What a hard disease. This beautiful poem moved me tears.
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Hi ladyfi, it is a horrible disease, my dear sister suffered so much with it! Thank you for the kind words!
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Wow…a bond so powerful that you found words for. Absolutely beautiful
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Thank you for those kind words! My bond with my dear sister shall last forever.
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John, if you happen to see this comment, I just noticed a little while ago that I am not following your blog.That was not intentional. I went to your blog yesterday to see if you had any new posts and I must have by accident hit the unfollow. I am so sorry! I did that to another follower as well. I am not very good at this WordPress. I love your blog!:)
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You don’t have to apologize Margie! Whether by accident or intentional, it doesn’t offend me the slightest. So please don’t worry π
I currently have my site set to “Private” due to organizing and not flooding your Reader feed while doing so. Hopefully, I’ll have it up soon!
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Thank you, John. I promise you it was not intentional. And when your blog is up again I will follow again. Best to you, always π
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A lovely tribute. A very difficult anniversary approaching. God bless.
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Many thanks! Yes, the anniversary of my sister’s death is almost here. So hard!
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This is so beautiful! Very nicely done and what a lovely tribute to your sister β€
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Thank you, Debbie for the kind words! I hope you are feeling better, Merry Christmas, xo
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This was so touching. π€
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Thank you, Robin.
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Merry Christmas and a happy new year to you my new friend ..so sorry about your sister am sure she is in a good place now.
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Thank you!
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Your words touched my heart. A poignant remberance. β€
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Thank you so much and thank you for the visit,
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You’re most welcome. β€
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This poem is so sad and at the same time so beautiful. I’m in awe of how you can transform the pain into art.
Lots of love!
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Mirjam, your words touched my heart! Thank you so much! Lots of love back to you!
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Dear Margie…
It is cold here
without you ~ I sleep
in our motherβs robe
the way she taught us
arms βround our knees
head tucked to chest β
*tears*
She will always be in your heart, just like your mother and grandma..I know how you feel. I know that dreadful heartache that’ll remain forever having lost a lovedone.. Im still here for you like a sister, like a mother, like a grandmother…HUGS!
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Oh, my dearest friend, you just lit up my heart. β€ How wonderful to see you here! I never expected it. I have been thinking of you so much today and here you show up! Be safe over there in Sydney. Hugs dear friend!
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truly heartfelt, and beautiful
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Thank you, Krissy. Your kind words mean so much!
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most welcome π
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This is the first post of yours I’ve read. Your words are vivid and evocative. I could see and feel your poetry. You can say so much in just one line. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt tribute to your sister.
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Thank you so much! Your kind words are appreciated!
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Beautiful,
sister to sister,
Heartwarming for all ……
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Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you mentioned the word heartwarming as my sister was one of the most heartwarming persons I have ever known.
She was loved by so many people as she always brought joy to their lives.
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That’s a lovely tribute to your sister. I never had any siblings, but I could feel the closeness, and the loss.
Thanks very much for following my blog.
Best wishes, Pete. π
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Many thanks for the kind words. It’s my pleasure to follow you.
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Okay itβs hard to type through my tears. These words are so beautiful Margie. You poured your love for Terri onto the page from your heart. I love you. So happy to see your friend Keshi found you here, I know she loves you too.
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Oh, my dear friend, you made me happy to see you here. Thank you for the lovely comment. I love you, too! β€
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What a touching tribute to your sister;-/
Those of us that have lost siblings share a special bond. Peace and a (hug) π₯
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your visit and your kind words mean so much! I so agree about a bond being there with another who has lost a sibling. May you find comfort in your loss and my your memory always be a blessing. β€
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